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Laura Coleman's avatar

Lovely, makes me feel so light and carefree! I love cloud watching!

Denise T Drapeau's avatar

Thank you for your comment!! I'm glad it had that effect on you! 😊

A Gentle Quill | CoraLynn 🌿's avatar

Such a beautiful poem 💚🌿 I do something similar when my mind becomes to crowded, but instead of clouds passing by, I write down what worries me, then imagine folding the paper into a boat and setting it on the surface of the sea or a river and let it drift away to the horizon 🌅⛵️

Denise T Drapeau's avatar

Oh, that's such a lovely image. Writing helps me clear away the thoughts as well. Picturing them floating away seems like a great meditative practice, and I'm sure it's calming. Thanks for sharing!

Blue Evergarden's avatar

I love the gentle permission this offering gits 🌻

I hope you are well😊

Denise T Drapeau's avatar

Thank you! That means a lot and I'm so glad you like it!

Willow's avatar

Oh I love this and i love clouds🤍

Denise T Drapeau's avatar

Thank you! Clouds are amazing and beautiful, aren't they?!

Willow's avatar

I never ever tire of watching them and seeing shapes 🥰

Denise T Drapeau's avatar

Me neither! I have another poem I'm working on about the clouds too. They're great subject matter!

Willow's avatar

Look forward to reading it !

Willow's avatar

I'm inspired to write one on clouds but I'm all out of inspiration for the day! 😄

Denise T Drapeau's avatar

Maybe tomorrow! 😀

Willow's avatar

Tomorrow comes sooner for me in the uk😃

Tom Tremblay's avatar

I felt more peaceful just reading it for the first time. I’m not good at meditation but this poem helps understand the process. Thank you.

Denise T Drapeau's avatar

I felt the same way, but the image of brushing away clouds really helps. I'm glad it made you feel peaceful!

Maureen Doallas's avatar

This works for me as a meditation, Denise. You might consider recording it.

Denise T Drapeau's avatar

Thank you! Great idea! I’ll try that!

Sylvie Muir's avatar

This seems like a good method to try and a beautiful poem

Denise T Drapeau's avatar

Thank you! It is so helpful to me and I hope it works for you as well.

Arend van Beelen's avatar

Beautiful and they felt to arrive at the right moment

Denise T Drapeau's avatar

Thank you! I’m glad you can feel them and hope they bring you peace.