Over the Threshold
The man, gentle, sun-leathered,
steps out of his car, glides
around to the other side,
where he opens the door
for his adoring wife
of fifty years.
He pulls out her cane, gently slides
one booted foot, then the other,
down to the ground, planting them
on the gravel driveway.
He places the cane in her dappled hand,
then firmly, deftly, ever so tenderly,
he hoists her out of her seat,
one hand on the curve of her back,
the other on her slender arm.
She leans on her cane
and her husband,
shuffling ever so slowly,
as he leads her, unfaltering,
along the walkway
to their humble front door.
He lifts her up
and carries her, adoringly,
his beautiful bride
of fifty years,
over the threshold,
with all the strength and love
of their wedding day.
I submitted this poem to a magazine and received an encouraging rejection informing me that my poem made it to the final round of readings. This was affirmation enough. So, rather than allowing myself to feel discouraged, I thought there is no better way to respond than to share my poem with readers. (Itβs been a while since Iβve posted here. This seems like the perfect time.) I hope it resonates with you!



This feels like a sweet scent of morning, Denise. A beautiful poem. Literary Mags are often looking for specific things, but I'm so glad you shared your writing with us π€
Truly lovely! I donβt know if Iβll ever be thin enough to be carried over a threshold but itβs such a sweet sentiment! Iβm glad you shared it with us!