What a peaceful, deeply resonant series of haikus. There is a gorgeous, quiet movement to these lines—like watching a painting come to life and then gently recede. That final stanza is an absolute masterpiece of emotional economy. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poetry today. 🪷✨
Denise, you’re very welcome. I’m glad the comment felt thoughtful, because your work deserved that kind of attention. Thank you for sharing something that gave me a reason to slow down and respond with care. 🙏
These haiku move like the water they describe—still on the surface, yet full of quiet depth beneath. The final image lingered with me long after I finished reading. Beautiful work.
Beautiful words and images!!
Thank you, Trisha!
My pleasure 💕
gorgeous photos! I love waterlilies.
Thank you! Me too!
Water lilies are so alluring!
You've captured them beautifully. I enjoy these little garden haiku journeys 🪷
Alluring is the perfect word for them! Thank you so much!!
What a peaceful, deeply resonant series of haikus. There is a gorgeous, quiet movement to these lines—like watching a painting come to life and then gently recede. That final stanza is an absolute masterpiece of emotional economy. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poetry today. 🪷✨
Thank you for taking the time to read my work and offer such a thoughtful comment! I appreciate this so much!
Denise, you’re very welcome. I’m glad the comment felt thoughtful, because your work deserved that kind of attention. Thank you for sharing something that gave me a reason to slow down and respond with care. 🙏
I'm so glad they had that effect. And thanks again for saying so.
Denise, you’re very welcome. Your words carried a quiet weight, and I’m glad I had the chance to sit with them. 🙏
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These haiku move like the water they describe—still on the surface, yet full of quiet depth beneath. The final image lingered with me long after I finished reading. Beautiful work.
Thank you for your generous praise of my work! I'm so glad my words resonated with you.